Saturday, April 19, 2014

SLEEPING ON THE WING POEMS 2013-2014 (Grade Eight): Gerard Manley Hopkins


“Write a poem in which you say how much you like a whole lot of different things of a particular kind. You could praise round things, whatever’s blue or orange or purple, sparkling things, flat things, things that are triangular or heavy or new. Begin with one thing--say, an icy window if you’re writing about cold things or square things or white ones--and then just go on naming others as you think of them. When you mention each thing, think of some particular time you’ve seen it, and try to get the way it looked at that time into what you say. One way to do this is to make up a word combination--a combination of words that is so particular, that gets the color and shape and movement of things so exactly, that it could perhaps be used only once, only to describe what you see at that one second in your life--‘skies of couple-colour as a brinded cow.’ You can try alliteration, too, if you like, and rhymes that are inside of lines.”

--from Kenneth Koch and Kate Farrell’s Sleeping on the Wing (Vintage, 1981).
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Burning Scorch
Molten lava, moving like a snail across grove,
burning wood to heat the pan, at the stove.
Flaming blowtorch heating unblemished steel,
propane tanks, they burn the color teal.

Diesel engines, powering grand old cars,
rocket fuel burning to the stars;
luminous light radiated from a torch,
magma buried in the earth's inner forge,
kettle boiling, whistling, for hot tea,
spontaneous combustion, suddenly scorching me.
Match being lit with friction, after which smoke.
Laser tools in preventing a crippling stroke.  --J.A.C.
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#1

Her feelings she hides
the dreams she can’t find
she’s loosing her mind
she’s falling behind
she can’t find her place
she’s losing her faith
she’s fallen from grace
she’s all over the place  --B.B.
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I felt the ocean.
It felt so cold.
Like winter.

I like winter.
The way snow falls.
The way it gently kisses the ground.
How it falls by the pound.

Ice cream is sold by the dollar.
Made in the ice-cold rooms.
Packaged with a green lid. 
To be sold to small kids.

Cold hands are deadly.
They are the product of dead animals.
They end up in the sky.  --I.C.
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I like windows, 
round windows, 
square windows, 
big windows, 
small windows. 
I like windows that are blue, 
or yellow, 
or maybe even red.
I prefer the windows with patterns around them, 
like flower patterns. 
I like windows with ice around them:
It looks pretty, how the ice curves around the window. 
I like that you can have the ability to see through windows. 
Windows are like superheroes. 
They are like gossip.
That windows tell you about the outside world 
is why I love them.  --C.D.
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I like doors.  Doors amuse me.
I like doors that are round from the top, and I like square doors.
I like wood doors. I like glass doors.
In my room I have a square wooden door.
When you think about it, doors are like you’re hiding something 
because you can go into a room and lock them.
I hide things a lot.  That’s why I like doors. 
I like doors with the locks on the doorknob, not under it.
I also like doors with handles that you have to push down,
Not handles you have to turn.
Doors can hide you from the world and sometimes keep you safe.
That’s why I like doors.  --R.E.
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Oranges on the counter in the kitchen.
Super cars at a stop light.
Fox photos on the Internet.
Tigers zooming at the zoo.
Big pumpkins in my friends’ backyard.
Carrots in the giant garden. 
Cheez-its in the back of my bedroom.
Drinking real Fanta at a restaurant.
Eating Cheetos out of a big bag.
Candy corn in a beautiful bowl.
Butterflies in Palmer Park.
Eating Popsicles in my fantastic front yard.  --M.F.
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Kings of Space

The mountain sits still, low but still tall;
Near is a broad lake supporting endless lives;
Above it the spacious sky, where there is no stopping;
Beneath it the earth on which we walk--we could walk forever.

Above the planet, far above, there is a star that brightly shines;
It brings warmth to even the largest consumers of space.
It is the greatest.  --J.H.
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Circular Sphere

A circular Sphere in the sky--
some say of cheese, but I ask why.

Bouncing on the ground,
flying lower every bound;
oh, circular sphere on the ground,

Flying through the air so high--
Flying fast though the end is nigh,
oh, circular sphere, don’t fly by.

Hot molten core,
Through the vacuum space you soar; 
Oh circular sphere below, where we chore,
don’t be bothered by our war.  --C.M.
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I thank the heavens for things that are warm,
The fire that warms us, playful and kind,
For the torch that guides us, wise and old,
For the sparks from the fireworks, young and spirited,
The elf-like sparks that form from the lighter,
The dragon-like flame that explodes from the flame thrower,
All this heat all different, yet all the same.

All this heat, thick or thin,
What is it, tiny fickle or giant flames?
Some swift, some strong,
All the same,
All beautiful,
All part of the flame.  --L.M.
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I love the early evening 
The cold dark and its sparkling stars
The smell of wetness of the road with cars

The way the ice forms on the window 
And how it melts when the sun shines 
Making sparkling ice designs 
I love the smell of fresh tea 
How it makes me feel free

I like way snowflakes fall
The way they settle lightly on the ground 
Wants to make me take flight 
Where snowflakes small 
Sit on the ground and shine 

When Christmas things are being sold 
I really like the cold  --J.R.
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“BEAUTIFUL” stayed in my head
as the beauty of the word “beautiful” turned grey
and all that was left was radiation that greyed the sky.

When it happened, it was quite beautiful.
All that stood around me were mushroom clouds
that soon started to swirl in a formation.
I recognized it, it was home in 2013.

I saw a whole other universe that looked just like today.
It looked clean, warless and breath taking.
It was an arm’s reach away.  I could almost touch it.

I reached and fell, and it was gone.
I realized that this is my world and this is my home.
I must stay here and fix what we have started.  --S.T.
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Dread

Death is a nuisance, one to be ignored.
We must learn to live without the fear of losing.
Fear is one thing not to be underestimated,
An element to be faced, 
Not disgraced.

Suffering is what those do who lose,
And talk about a football game, I do not.
Speak of those who have lost their loved ones, I do.
They are the ones who cry but move on.
For they have learned
That mourning over the past is something.
However, those we mourn for, would want us to move on.
Mourning over someone until their buried body rots
Simply isn’t showing respect.

Everyone lives once.
Some think they may live a second life born differently.
Whether you believe it or not,
It’ll be easier to live life as we were born to,
Free.  --M.V.G.
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Realm of the Dead

I reel in amazement as I recall the things that are dead
  The ones whose lives have come to a sudden end;
    A bird with feathers of white and brown, falling into the cold hard ground;
 Pictures of corpses in black and white,  a time when days were dark year-round;
   Directed by talented people world-wide, the twenty-six ways one could ever die;
     Toying with the eyes of a steamed poor soul, dinner is served in East Shanghai.

Dead things, queer things, dried blood and ants;
   Objects of rotted, decomposing flesh;
     Things that have expired of its use;
Just like the dead computer on my lap:
Why.  --B.W.





























SLEEPING ON THE WING POEMS 2013-2014 (Grade Eight): Emily Dickinson


“Write a poem that is written in somewhat the same way as ‘I Heard a Fly Buzz’; that is, write about something that is terribly significant to you--the end of the world, the beginning of the world, your death, your birth--and in the same poem write about something that is very insignificant--a leaf dropping, the sound of a footstep, the telephone ringing, combing your hair. Don‘t say what your emotions are, and don’t try to make an obvious connection between what is important and what isn’t. Let them simply be happening at the same time: ‘I heard something drop when the world began.’ It may help if you think of it all as having happened a long time ago--if you’re thinking of another century, you can probably calmly and objectively imagine both a rose blooming and a volcano erupting. Great distances of time and space make everything begin to even out.

“Try using very short lines and very simple words. Use dashes and extra capital letters if they seem inspiring.”

--from Kenneth Koch and Kate Farrell’s Sleeping on the Wing (Vintage, 1981).
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I felt a leaf drop–at the world's demise
the dissonance and similarity
was solid enough to cut
between the lines of the orchestra

The tree all-feeling
was cut to the trunk
the fire and heat
giving it a flaming coffin

The last will and testament of Gaia
mother nature and jack frost
left people nothing
but its memories in the dead.

in the essence of the moment
the little leaf stood still
unaware of the discord 'round and then
nothing.  --J.A.C.
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I watched a leaf drop—when I took my last breath—
the stillness in the air
reminded me of an empty space out of nowhere
between the earth and space.

The problem is—I trust people too easily—
at the end they turn out to be different.

I watched the sun set—as I spent my last 20 minutes —
I regret everything I did not do.
Take a chance.
You never know what will happen

I watched the last flower grow—as I breathed the fresh air—
it’s ironic how depressed people 
are the ones who understand the value of happiness more
than the people who claim to be happy.

I remember what you did before—you were after me—
you chased me with knives
when I mistook them for roses

As I look at the world—for the last time—
for all this is worth,
we shall not dare to rest
before we have filled our hearts and heads with love
and worked our fingers to the last bone.  --B.B.
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I saw the sun set- when the world stopped,
The golden shine reflecting off the ocean. 
It reminded me of the day it began,
When it rose for the very first time.

My father was passing slowly.
Day by day it got worse.
Finally, his soul decided 
He couldn’t stand it anymore, so he left us. 
Since that very day, it was like the world ending--
Because nothing would ever be the same. 

That very night, when I was sitting on the cliff top,
and when the sun was setting, I felt something soft 
brush past me--an airy embrace.  --S.B.
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I heard the birds chirp.
Almost like complete silence,
Complete silence like the darkness. 

I heard the rain.
I felt the rain.
It felt familiar,
Like blood pouring down.

I saw a car,
Driving fast.
Like a jet.
Like death.

Blue is opposite,
Opposite of red.
Blue is cold.
Red is warm.
Warm like blood,
Cold like ice.

Death.
Death is loud,
Death is silent,
Death is colourful,
Death is anything it wants to be.   --I.C.
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There were footsteps.
My mother would put on her hair dryer.
I heard them from afar.
Whenever I were to cry, 
I couldn’t see.

I liked that white noise. 
I hated that noise!

I knew it was the end.
I cried.

The footsteps got closer.
I still don’t understand what that weird noise was....
I took a deep breath.
I didn’t understand what was going on.
If only I’d known that breath was my last 
(Everyone was looking at me),
I wouldn’t have continued to try.

It was so loud.
I stopped trying and accepted it.

I can now remember the day I came into this world, 
It was my end.
I was small.  --C.D.
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I hear a scream,
Loud and silent,
While I watch the leaves fall.
I hear the scream go on and on.
She has died.
Everyone one is crying.
I sit here twiddling my thumbs, not giving a thought about it.
People, they have feelings.  People care.
I don't understand why they do.
I watch the leaves fall as I hear everyone crying,
Crying as loud as a lion’s roar all together.
I like her but not that much.
I care about her a little but not a lot. 
I should care about her, but I don’t because she wasn't a 
good person sometimes.
She was mean and cruel on occasion.
But at the same time she was my friend.
We would watch the rain fall slowly from the sky. 
Every drop of rain, different sizes.
Watching each one is tiring.  --R.E.
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The last thing I heard—was my dog— 
I couldn’t feel—anything—
When I died—The sound of it—
As if I am supposed to go— 

Was like happiness—but still— 
Everything moves out of my way— 
Between my dog and me— 
As I go up—to light— 

As I watch the sadness—in him— 
I see Green everywhere— 
I couldn’t feel—anything—
As I watch sad and sorrowful— 

His breath was heavy—strong—
It is as if—I am nothing— 
He witnessed—my death— 
As I go away—I’m Floating—  --M.F.
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He put on a Sweater--
Although he was not cold--
To Cover the Stained shirt--
Yet the stain was still there.

Once he was home--
Feeling cozy and Warm--
He took the shirt--
And tried to Wash the Stain away.

But he used Steel wool--
Boy--what a big Mistake
He Threw the shirt away--
And the sweater--stayed.  --J.H.
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I was Called over when my Life was set in Motion--
The scene that was Projected
A swaying Slide was the Notion
And how that Reflected
A great Migration--
How the Three could be so Connected
From My own Nation--
Coming from them no one Expected
Saved me from My Own Devastation
So Different were they I had never seen such Things
I Arrived to a Great Sensation--
United over Three Strings
That United me and Another from the same Location
Three Kings.  --C.M.
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I heard a leaf fall--As I swam
And I could see again--
The gentle splash in the pool--
And then the wind blew me from the dark.

It was as if I was in the ocean--
Between the darkness and myself-- 
On a peaceful sunny day--
With Black, blue and shades of purple, A quiet hum--

All of my energy--all wrung dry--
I found the darkness
And all--gathering around the school--
Then It happened--I found the end--

The onset of suffering, when she came--
Could I make it to the end--is there an end--
As fast as the wind
When would I stop, would I stop--

I willed my boundaries, as I swam.  --L.M.
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I hear car noises and alarms
A Moment of peace--realization
I hear the quick footsteps
Blue eyes glazing around

The noise, the rush
I’m waiting for the world
Blurred sight through the wall
The world, waiting for me

I see the bright light
Blood rushing through veins
The first breath of fresh air 
First thought--first move  --J.R.
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Oh no there he comes
the king of thy castle
The fresh blue flowers
the beast of Ogdentown
the beast of Ogdentown
The fresh blue flowers
the king of thy castle
Here he comes as the people of Ogdentown cheer 
in thy ghastly Forest
as the beast grows stronger
lies a cute dog
the dog grows ill
with vicious teeth
as the beast bows--to the king
that lives in thy castle
The dog rules the castle  --S.T.
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I see a girl way down below 
Jump up and down in the meadow.
As I watch her play,
The sky goes gray.
I watch in terror
As I spot something larger
Than a human error.
As the great hovercrafts descend,
Struck with panic the people freeze,
Stopped by the sound of bees.
Thousands of voices strike out in fear
And are silenced, right here.  --M.V.G.
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The Hatching Reformation

The egg moves, the love quakes
Two anxious hearts, they separate
Every crack on the egg--so slight
Was like the couple having another fight

As time ticks by, the two hearts grew cold,
The chick within--so eager and bold
Numbness--all they felt upon another
The chick--ever so strong- will soon meet life

Parting--Inevitable--As they leave each other
With broken hearts and broken promises
Blue--heartbreak--changes them forever
Until the egg has cracked in pieces

New Life--The exciting squeaks
In this exciting new possession--they rise
the darkness fades as the sun comes up